PLANNING FOR WRITING.
INTRODUCTION:
WHAT: partner yoga challenge
WHERE: inside Room 7
WHEN: Monday 17th September 2018, in the morning, first thing in the morning
WHO: Room 7 students
WHY: have fun
HOW: miss had a slideshow, kids in partners.
KEYWORDS
- Flexible, splits, lift, push, hold yourself up, hold hands, clasp hands, grip, hips, shoulders,
- balance, fall, collapse, tumble, flattened,
PARAGRAPH 1:
- Roll, got into partners, move the furniture away,
- Miss explained what we were doing
- First pose - easy, happy, going to get harder, confused, confident, trust and feel comfortable
- with partner
PARAGRAPH 2:
- Challenging
- Making shapes with our bodies
- Keeping calm, trying your best
- Which ones did you try AND FAIL?
- Which ones were really HARD?
PARAGRAPH 3:
- Most complex or difficult poses..
- Which ones did you try AND FAIL?
- Which ones were really HARD?
CONCLUSION:
- My favourite one was..
- The hardest one was...
In the morning Miss Ashley and rm 7 were
singing a waiata we were singing A haka ma,
Hareruia and Ma is white. After we did the
roll. Mis Ashley said if you can go into
partners yes we can. So we got in partners
singing a waiata we were singing A haka ma,
Hareruia and Ma is white. After we did the
roll. Mis Ashley said if you can go into
partners yes we can. So we got in partners
Miss put something on the TV and it was yoga
It look like shapes.
It look like shapes.
PARAGRAPH 1
After Room 7 roll we are going to have some
fun .
fun .
It is just for us to have fun ok everyone
replied Miss. Yes said room 7 as so we got into
Partners Me and Ana was in partners .
Than Maria and me swapped partners so it was
Maria and Ana And me and Vina. Ana said that
she was so Flexible at doing this Amazing yoga.
Ok Sumuree she Replied slowly said Ana. after
Miss Ashley said SPOT NOW!!!
Everyone we look like a statue.
replied Miss. Yes said room 7 as so we got into
Partners Me and Ana was in partners .
Than Maria and me swapped partners so it was
Maria and Ana And me and Vina. Ana said that
she was so Flexible at doing this Amazing yoga.
Ok Sumuree she Replied slowly said Ana. after
Miss Ashley said SPOT NOW!!!
Everyone we look like a statue.
To me I was finding like I was a shape because
I did a love hate shape like this
.
I did a love hate shape like this
.
Author: maani
Checked by: sumuree
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One thing (sumuree) did well was putting paragraphs and full stops
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