Wednesday, July 4, 2018

Walking narrative

Brainstorm of ideas - Walking,People,Tree,Raptures,A pathway,Forest

Describing character/setting - Exercising,Blonde hair, sister or Winz.

Ideas for the problem - they are getting big or fat. Wath is why they wath to do some exercising.

Ideas for the solution -  by exercising and getting so  strong girl.

Start here: once they was tow blonde hair sister and they
name was Marilyn and Ana. Ana waiting to go for a walk in the forest
Ok! Ana so we went in the red and blue car then and we blasted off to the
We got out the raptures and we start to walk on the pathway
in the forest
next we start to walk. The End


Where do speech marks go
At the beginning of a sentence.
How to put in other punctuationAt a end of a full stop.

When to start a new line or when
to keep writing.

At a end of a full stop and at the beginning of the sentence.

Different words for ‘said’
Asked, replied, responded, yelled, screamed, shouted, mumbled, said, muttered, gasped, panting, chuckled, thought, told, uttered, continued, whispered
Adding adverbs . Responded politely, asked politely, screamed

“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in
two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to
herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but
the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house
kept her going.


Thursday, June 28, 2018

Fairy tale introduction

Fairy tale introductionOne marvelous Annoying  day there was a
beautiful girl who was a extremely rich. She was Extremely
lost in the forest. So she wanting to go and visit her sister 5
But she did not get out of the forest so a farmer came and
said where are you going girl i want to  go and visit my 5 sister
ok. Goodbye wait!  please i need your halp please ok want with.
I do not no how to Escape the forest. So then the farmer said
you have to help me to Catch milky cow. Ok then so they catch
milky cow 

Once upon a time 
One sunny day
One beautiful bright sunny day
One marvelous day
One horrible rainy day
In a faraway land
In the deepest ocean
In the darkest prison
Far far away
In a dark forest
In a vast desert
In a creepy dungeon
In the scary woods
In a haunted house
In a movie set
In a creepy maze
In a wonderful school
In a small town

There was
A beautiful girl
An old man
Royal family
A wise girl
A handsome man
A traveller
A scary monster
A butler
Handsome prince
beautiful queen
Creepy clown
Young princess
Royal king
Famous celebrity
A gangster bodyguard
A music producer
A sad servant
A sneaky thief 
Who was Lost
Enormously rich
Who lived in a cottage
Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters
Had a glass eyeball
Had a ginormous family
Lived in las vegas
Who had robotic legs
Who was a marvellous actor
Who only ever had onions
Who was a robber
Who lived on the streets
Part time DJ part time spy
Who had only leg
Who was a murderer
Who was a huge nerd
Who had one fat eye. 

Monday, June 25, 2018

my haunted house

One day they was a Haunted house wath live on a pig stone and They was Dead trees to.
Then this boy call dav he was so terrified because he saw IT. HA HA HA!!! Where did you
came for boy. Wath is your name boy my name is dav. Ok came in dav IT said do you want to come
in dav i will give you a tea. Thank you said dav bat Certainly IT he Open his  mouth
And he eat him TI said yummy yummy boy he love the to drink his blood. And as IT went to his
shared were has layer were lot’s of bones.

THE END Image result for thank you for reading my story

Thursday, June 21, 2018

Title: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative
Labels: writing

House on fire
Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming
Image result for fire housePut the fire out with water hoses
Smoke is strong
Problem - there might be people inside?!
PS4 is still inside. - valuables
Clothes are inside.
Might be cats or dogs inside

Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.
Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite
t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.

Fire in the house
One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigsty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

Monday, June 18, 2018

Night and light

This is my Night and light about the moon.

Wednesday, June 13, 2018